Thanks to Mrs.HUMBLE's Pre AP 8th grade class at WORKMAN JR. HIGH for reading Cocky Lucky. Your review comments rocked! So, I took out "jimmying" and "ciggies", pinpointed the location, and used one change word for word.
Keep your fingers crossed--and you'll see your suggestions in print soon.
It was exciting being a part of this. The class was actually Mrs. Humbles' and she did a great job of involving the kids on short notice. We can't wait to pre-order on Amazon!
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