Five ingredients for Poor Writing --Author Nicola Morgan shares these tips on her blog. She calls herself the Crazy Old Bat, but she knows her stuff.
A Few to Watch:
LOW STAKES – what does the MC stand to lose if he/she fails?
OVER WRITING – cut the back story, excess adjectives, adverbs, and rein it in. Mainly, don't give the reader more details or info than they need or want.
Nicola's website
http://www.helpineedapublisher.blogspot.com/2012/01/crabbits-tips-for-writers-5-ingredients.html
These are pretty helpful. Now I've got to go check my WiP to check and see if my MC has any real stakes at hand. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteAngela:
DeleteI did too!