I wanted to participate (minus the tagging part).
Instructions
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next seven lines as they're written--no cheating!
4. Tag 7 other writers
5. Let them know
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next seven lines as they're written--no cheating!
4. Tag 7 other writers
5. Let them know
I decided to take the excerpt from my YA Modern Fantasy
novel instead:
"room, staring at the open window.
He’d pixilated her. She’d been entranced, fooled. The Fae came into focus,
perched lightly on the sill.
Zanrien
held her gaze for a moment, dropped, then was gone.
The
dizziness cleared. No, no, how could I have been so stupid? Panic
charged through her. She felt for the Mirror necklace that had been at her
neck.
It
was next to her skin."
Fun!
ReplyDelete...the line that intrigues me the most is also the one that confuses me the most.
"He'd pixilated her."
Sounds like a digital image/copy, not being fooled by pixy magic :)
Pretty good lines. Very intriguing.
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